Just caught up with this AntG.
It has taken my lunch hour + a good bit of the arvo + a double shot long black & a lamington to catch up.
Love the style & the story - don't change a thing.
It reminds me of Peter Carey's "True History of the Kelly Gang" in some ways, as in:
"The novel is written in a distinctive vernacular style, with little in the way of punctuation or grammar; the influence of Kelly's Irish heritage is also apparent in his language."At first sort of difficult style to read (in comparison to novel style) but then you understand that it fits the story like a glove.
Don't change
or correct anything
cheers
