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pintofpale
pintofpale
SA
229 posts
SA, 229 posts
5 Jul 2008 10:51am
Wind, elusive so -
the tree hardly moves at all
my lawn needs mowing





What is Haiku?

Haiku is one of the most important form of traditional Japanese poetry. Haiku is, today, a 17-syllable verse form consisting of three metrical units of 5, 7, and 5 syllables.

How to write Haiku

In japanese, the rules for how to write Haiku are clear, and will not be discussed here. In foreign languages, there exist NO consensus in how to write Haiku-poems. Anyway, let's take a look at the basic knowledge:

What to write about?

Haiku-poems can describe almost anything, but you seldom find themes which are too complicated for normal PEOPLE's recognition and understanding. Some of the most thrilling Haiku-poems describe daily situations in a way that gives the reader a brand new experience of a well-known situation.

The metrical pattern of Haiku

Haiku-poems consist of respectively 5, 7 and 5 syllables in three units. In japanese, this convention is a must, but in english, which has variation in the length of syllables, this can sometimes be difficult.

The technique of cutting.

The cutting divides the Haiku into two parts, with a certain imaginative distance between the two sections, but the two sections must remain, to a degree, independent of each other. Both sections must enrich the understanding of the other.

To make this cutting in english, either the first or the second line ends normally with a colon, long dash or ellipsis.

The seasonal theme.

Each Haiku must contain a kigo, a season word, which indicate in which season the Haiku is set. For example, cherry blossoms indicate spring, snow indicate winter, and mosquitoes indicate summer, but the season word isn't always that obvious.

Please notice that Haiku-poems are written under different rules and in many languages. For translated Haiku-poems, the translator must decide whether he should obey the rules strictly, or if he should present the exact essence of the Haiku. For Haiku-poems originally written in english, the poet should be more careful. These are the difficulties, and the pleasure of Haiku.
FreeFerty
FreeFerty
NSW
169 posts
NSW, 169 posts
5 Jul 2008 12:08pm
Haiku WTF?
Let's talk about Kiteboarding
Board off doubt manhood
SaveTheWhales
SaveTheWhales
WA
1913 posts
WA, 1913 posts
5 Jul 2008 10:10am
I'll give it a shot..

Wind - is pumpin
Trees bent sideways
bugga the misses munch
I'm outta here

sorry, my bad
pintofpale
pintofpale
SA
229 posts
SA, 229 posts
5 Jul 2008 11:40am
Hey Free Flirty theres no wind and you should expand yr mind besides chicks like Haiku
lostinlondon
lostinlondon
VIC
1159 posts
VIC, 1159 posts
5 Jul 2008 1:07pm
Pint of Pale not bright,
FreeFerty haikus like kiteloop!
Pale likes to poo-stance
KiteAction
KiteAction
QLD
337 posts
QLD, 337 posts
5 Jul 2008 1:23pm
Love the part about "the most Thrilling Haiku-poems" Man your one thrill seaker!!
Slow down dude or you might hurt youself!
pintofpale
pintofpale
SA
229 posts
SA, 229 posts
5 Jul 2008 3:17pm
I might poo stance true
but london can only fly
a one string kite ha!
teabagg
teabagg
NSW
141 posts
NSW, 141 posts
5 Jul 2008 6:43pm
i had kite today
just one out all mates be gay
can pass on haiku
teabagg
teabagg
NSW
141 posts
NSW, 141 posts
5 Jul 2008 7:36pm
too tough for kiters
maybe try windsurf forum
they are all nerds there
GreenPat
GreenPat
QLD
4107 posts
lostinlondon
lostinlondon
VIC
1159 posts
VIC, 1159 posts
6 Jul 2008 12:54pm
Greenpat: posts old threads
This is new thread not old thread
Bow-mo-sex-u-al...
lostinlondon
lostinlondon
VIC
1159 posts
VIC, 1159 posts
6 Jul 2008 1:02pm
pintofpale said...

I might poo stance true
but london can only fly
a one string kite ha!


When I was ten, true
One string kite was summer fun
Self taught hard kid
Smedg
Smedg
NSW
836 posts
NSW, 836 posts
6 Jul 2008 6:34pm
Haiku poems suck
and some don't even make sense
refrigerator
pintofpale
pintofpale
SA
229 posts
SA, 229 posts
7 Jul 2008 10:35am
Haiku verse again
green pat has been here before
he is the guru
pintofpale
pintofpale
SA
229 posts
SA, 229 posts
7 Jul 2008 10:44am


Haiku poems suck
and some don't even make sense
refrigerator

Haiku WTF?
Let's talk about Kiteboarding
Board off doubt manhood



refrigerator?
homosexuality?
justification?
rusty7
rusty7
QLD
504 posts
QLD, 504 posts
7 Jul 2008 2:51pm
no wind, see the trees
green arrows on seabreeze
unreliable!
teabagg
teabagg
NSW
141 posts
NSW, 141 posts
7 Jul 2008 4:36pm
yeah whats up with that
wait all day but still no kite
am flabergasted
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