Rob S said...
Just can't believe that ever happened. Ryan has sucked you in.
Yep, reads much more like fiction the second time through! Ah well, a bit of egg on the face does wonders for the complexion now n then. S'pose I was a bit trigger happy after a couple of sessions where others, who could have perceived the imminent danger and were better positioned than myself, failed to intervene in situations where joe public was in the firing line.
Nice story bluurd. Perhaps you could develop a series of "tales from the pond" each more fantastic than the next.