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the haiku thread

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GreenPat
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20 Mar 2007 3:17am
I fear motorbikes
at last mine hurt me today
it leant on my foot
nebbian
nebbian
WA
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nebbian nebbian
WA, 6277 posts
20 Mar 2007 3:17am
Green arrows appear
tantalise with their promise
then wither and die.
chairman
chairman
500 posts
chairman chairman
500 posts
20 Mar 2007 7:40am
Green arrows
The slow removal of underwear
I like being tantalised
The real thing is all the better for it
GreenPat
GreenPat
QLD
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GreenPat GreenPat
QLD, 4105 posts
20 Mar 2007 9:57am
dude that's not haiku. 5-7-5.
GreenPat
GreenPat
QLD
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GreenPat GreenPat
QLD, 4105 posts
21 Mar 2007 12:31am
light wind at The Pin
impossible to make ground
but glad to get wet
greenleader
greenleader
QLD
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greenleader greenleader
QLD, 5283 posts
21 Mar 2007 1:34am
you were at " the pin " greenpat!!!

damn you! still, its such a nice hangout.....
GreenPat
GreenPat
QLD
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GreenPat GreenPat
QLD, 4105 posts
21 Mar 2007 1:39am
no not the gold coast:
where the sun sets in the sea
western australia
junior freestyle
junior freestyle
QLD
546 posts
junior freestyle junior freestyle
QLD, 546 posts
21 Mar 2007 9:16am
kitesurfers suck ass
when they spray you it brings pain
screw you kitesurfers

lol no hate intended
Leech
Leech
WA
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Leech Leech
WA, 1933 posts
21 Mar 2007 1:13pm
how many work hours
can i waste before IT
blocks seabreeze from me?
Leech
Leech
WA
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Leech Leech
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22 Mar 2007 12:54pm
still can't understand
why junior freestyle's "Joined" date
updates everyday
NotWal
NotWal
QLD
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NotWal NotWal
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22 Mar 2007 3:15pm
Push tacks are elusive things
Elusive like the Bigfoot or Yeti
Still I must seek them
NotWal
NotWal
QLD
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NotWal NotWal
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22 Mar 2007 3:21pm
The work day is long
The hours of sunlight are few
I am despondent
Mr Milk
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NSW
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22 Mar 2007 10:18pm
A limerick would
hit the lip more easily
a sonnet is harder
sinker
sinker
WA
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sinker sinker
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22 Mar 2007 8:23pm
what became of
Forecast frontal winds today?
stupid weathermen..



greenleader
greenleader
QLD
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22 Mar 2007 11:21pm
oh i get it!

'you naughty ocean

teasing us with your vigour

prisoner i am'


NotWal
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QLD
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22 Mar 2007 11:43pm
Nearly Greeny, close enough for the great unwashed, but the poetry police would say wrong number of syllables for a formal haiku.
(5,7,5)
de de de de dum
de de de de de de dum
de de de de dum
tobes
tobes
NSW
1000 posts
tobes tobes
NSW, 1000 posts
23 Mar 2007 12:52am
Harness is fraying
It looks windy tomorrow
Hope it doesn't break
nebbian
nebbian
WA
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nebbian nebbian
WA, 6277 posts
22 Mar 2007 11:18pm
Huey is cruel
Putting massive green arrows
Just after Tabou
greenleader
greenleader
QLD
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greenleader greenleader
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23 Mar 2007 12:38am
da nationals rules

full of beer and good fun dudes

you not there you lose
GreenPat
GreenPat
QLD
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23 Mar 2007 1:11am
harness broke last week
now I have a mighty one
mystic warrior
greenleader
greenleader
QLD
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greenleader greenleader
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23 Mar 2007 1:23am
i have an itch yeah

yeah i need to see to big time

it is the ocean
poor relative
poor relative
WA
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poor relative poor relative
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23 Mar 2007 12:28am
Piece of **** plunger
Thin red rubber splits and tears
Piece of **** still floats

knot board
knot board
QLD
1241 posts
knot board knot board
QLD, 1241 posts
23 Mar 2007 10:32am
why do members here
now appreciate haiku
better to drink beer
Leech
Leech
WA
1933 posts
Leech Leech
WA, 1933 posts
23 Mar 2007 9:35am
quote:
Originally posted by nebbian

Huey is cruel
Putting massive green arrows
Just after Tabou


Ha ha, I was thinking your first line was only 4 syllables, then I remembered you're from Qld.

"croowel" vs "crll"
Leech
Leech
WA
1933 posts
Leech Leech
WA, 1933 posts
23 Mar 2007 9:37am
quote:
Originally posted by greenleader

da nationals rules

full of beer and good fun dudes

you not there you lose


Ah! but here's a Qlder who still considers "roowels" to be one syllable.

Hmmm... the jury's out
nebbian
nebbian
WA
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23 Mar 2007 10:26am
quote:
Originally posted by Leech



Ha ha, I was thinking your first line was only 4 syllables, then I remembered you're from Qld.

"croowel" vs "crll"




People who count the
syllables in a haiku
need to get out more

GreenPat
GreenPat
QLD
4105 posts
GreenPat GreenPat
QLD, 4105 posts
23 Mar 2007 11:45am
quote:
Originally posted by knot board

why do members here
now appreciate haiku
better to drink beer


Hey, if you don't like it, don't do it
Leech
Leech
WA
1933 posts
Leech Leech
WA, 1933 posts
23 Mar 2007 11:50am
quote:
Originally posted by nebbian




People who count the
syllables in a haiku
need to get out more




I challenge you to
write haiku without counting
any syllables
knot board
knot board
QLD
1241 posts
knot board knot board
QLD, 1241 posts
23 Mar 2007 12:53pm
quote:
Originally posted by GreenPat

quote:
Originally posted by knot board

why do members here
now appreciate haiku
better to drink beer


Hey, if you don't like it, don't do it


a rhythmic haiku
produces soothing feeling
just like a cold beer
knot board
knot board
QLD
1241 posts
knot board knot board
QLD, 1241 posts
23 Mar 2007 2:16pm
I have just noticed
Seabreeze.com.au
sounds nice in haiku
GreenPat
GreenPat
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GreenPat GreenPat
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23 Mar 2007 3:16pm
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